I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Cody.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have done a twist on your movie, also I like how you have showed us who and what the characters are.
Next time you could add more writing on your blurb, also you could add colour on your post.
What is peter pan and what does he do?
By for now...